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crazy34 2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Aww, such a satisfying ending!
Haha, and I loved Kyle and Scott. Especially Scott, but yeah, they were hilarious. :D
big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-12-31 . chapter 1
i actually love it. i've become somehwat of a slash fangirl, so i've read some crap. but i really love this. it's very good. good job. i like it. i mean, i love jacks and sam, honestly. but you know who really got to me? kyle and scott. they were just so adorable! again, good job.
Satan's Angelic Mistress 2008-12-03 . chapter 1
They smirk entirely too much for it to be healthy. And is really really distracting from the story, and turns them into boring characters. Which they aren't, but everytime they smirk its just like "OMG are they all clones or something?"

So um, yeah... try to keep your characters distinct by not giving all of them the same mannerisms/traits/quirks?
Bloodfeeder 2008-11-16 . chapter 1
Aw.. Sweet!! I like the ending, Actually, I use the same excuse for why I don't like contacts!!
hehe.
Lee
Itsa Mia 2008-09-04 . chapter 1
Every time he fixed his glasses, i remembered to fix mine. Strange. This was a cute story, which is like a 10 in my book, and it was well written and consice, but there were some typo's nearing the end. check your word processor. Love it.
PoertyQueen 2008-04-04 . chapter 1
I wubed it *Big hugs*
Evvy daVain 2008-03-22 . chapter 1
Squee*
This is about the...7th time-ish I've read this, and it never gets old. I almost wish it was longer, I love these characters!
i-see-faeries 2007-11-04 . chapter 1
Took me four days to read this, but s'll good. ^^ I love it. Sam is adorable and Jackson is hilarious. And the rest are just so ... Haha, love it, nice job.
paputsza 2007-09-09 . chapter 1
pronounciation notes are /useless/ this late in the story. i like it though. so cute, i's sad it'rs done, even though its a 1shot.
Iced Tei 2007-09-05 . chapter 1
This is perfection. I honestly cannot describe it in any other way. Bravo!
dreamerdoll 2007-06-07 . chapter 1
Oh, this is definitely going on my "faves"...so glad I found it, and I'm doubly glad you cleared up the pronunciation thing, because I was saying (or thinking) it the French way! So cute, by the way. I'm absolutely in LOVE with Sam...haha. And Jacks, of course; Love his name!
Amerez 2007-05-20 . chapter 1
hello, totally loved the story. Very well written, and the characters were adorable. I would write a better review but it's almost 4am and I'm fighting a loosing battle against conciousness now that the story's over. Keep up the good work!
Lidyah 2007-01-12 . chapter 1
I read this before - and forgot to review it and then I forgot who wrote it. Dunce much.

Anyway, this was a great story - I prefer it as a one shot, but hey maybe when you have time you can write a future fic about this? (trying my luck here)

Anyway as usual your writing is a delight to read. Thanks for sharing ♥
blast off. 2006-12-11 . chapter 1
Okay, well, I could definately make this a huge, super long review about how awesome that was and how funny and everything, but I'm afraid I'm about to fall asleep right here, and my headache is literally killing me.

Personally, I think this would make a definite chapter-story, one that I'd find very readable. I'd love it, actually. xD

But whatever. I like the whole concept, and the way it's written. Also how each of the band members are testing Sam, seeing if he's appropriate manager material.

Meh, I'm literally going to fall asleep right now... >_<
And the pounding music my friends are listening to isn't helping.

So, I'mma read more of your stories tomorrow when [hopefully] I'm less tired after playing hockey.

Byye.
Aimee Straughston 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
Adorable story. Kudos for making it believable. I like Sam's character a lot.
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