Very nice *applause* It definitly sounds like you were influenced by Manson... Funny how nice Satan sounds in a poem like this. But, back to the point, it was very good. _

I know I'm your's for the taking...yours

wow.. very pwoerful and well written

Lovely writing. Not something I would write, as you know, and I dont' think it's something you believe, but all together, it's beautiful. I love your word choice. *muah!*

Kels

long time no read, you are such thye drama queen, you know that?

I love manson, and now i love you...though i'm a devout atheist and i believe in no such thing as heaven or hell...it's still a great fucking poem...so there you go...enjoy my delight...it happens not often...

TheBrokenWanderer