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| Chandra-Moon 2005-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseI'm going to rome this summer. If I could write about it has a stunningly as you have done, I think I would kill myself then and there. Magnificent. |
| Millay Inspired 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseYes, yes, yes. I did not like the quote, it felt forced, but other than that I enjoyed this immensely. Oh, also the word whilst bothered me because it wasn't necessary, but I decided I rather more liked the effect of white, whilst than white, while. I enjoyed the theme, the water/time references, etc. |
| Calligrapher of Hearts 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuse...** hell. I'm struck for words, seriously. This is just exquisite! Beautiful, great wording, brilliant structure... Just... incredible! =oD |
| in theory 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOh god, this blew me away, quite simply. Every line was as complex as the next, your diction is fabulously intricate and perfectly abstract. Your insight into this foreign place is profound, each of my senses were taunted in this poem. I especially adored the "no water/...no tide/...no shore..." that will stick in my mind for quite awhile (which is saying something). Seriously, a work of art. |
| Lines To Time 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseEverything about this is completely dazzling. Miss Sophie: I hate you. :-P |
| Rob Roy '03 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseFifteen. Younger than me, and writing better poetry than mine... Gah. *Grin* Such beautiful writing, too... Congratulations on a very well-crafted poetry. Your style of writing lends itself very well to symbolism, which is always useful. |
| pims 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, as always |