 wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-09-07 . chapter 1this is one of those poems I read and go God I wish I wrote that. |
 Sharakinpaix 2005-07-26 . chapter 1I think I know what you're referring to... Is it the Western Hemisphere? I quite agree. I quite agree. |
 simpleplan13 2005-07-21 . chapter 1very cool... i really love the glory or nothing part... nicely written |
 kalmia raphael 2005-07-14 . chapter 1i love this poem. however... i don't exactly understand all of it. it reads really well and you use really unexpected unconventional metaphors ... this line rocks: "It'll be something like a homicide scene strewn across their living room walls." Guessing this poem is about defying tradition - 2 partners in crime or some sort doing something outrageous and different which everyone disapproves of. |
 do not resuscitate 2005-07-14 . chapter 1"he tells me glory or nothing/ glory or we're nothing." i love that. this is beautiful. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-13 . chapter 1Utterly fascinating. Excellent. |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2005-07-13 . chapter 1Interesting piece. Cool poem. |