Great emotions here. Wonderfully done. Btw... I seldom read T so don't think I'm igoring you or something. Anyhow keep up the awesome work.

I feel like this all the time unfortunately. Sad but truthful poem. Well done.

I like it, though I agree, the ending could be different. Then again, endings are (most of the time) the most difficult part of a poem. Other then that, this was really relatable and powerful. Great job. -

Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.

overall I like this, although it feels a little fragmented here: "to consume every inch/ of my body and soul.". I'm also kind of over angst, but that's more like fake angst, and this seems more real. "even the smallest rock" seems a little obscure, although that might just be me not quite getting it. Nice work. (thanks, by the way, for pointing out the error in 'seraphica'. much appreciated. :) )

You have basically summarized my teenage years...I love it! Nice work! Keep it up!

This is really good. Deep and dark. Very nicely written. queenvixta

all of use are scared of falling but what matters is if you shatter when you hit the poem

I have that happen to me alot, where something that's almost a song turns into a poem. Anyway this is really goog like always. And the depression always returns doesn't it?

ANNA

Maybe that is the way its meant to end? I think it was well written, full of the emotion of the time. Well Done.

Kee it up.

This is really good..I love it..Don't know what else to say! _

Much love, Rosanna.

I think you need more pauses. I'd add in some commas, personally. It's good without them too though.

great flow, as always simple, the poem is easy to relate to and leaves me all tingly inside. _ wonderful work.

* noelle

'that I will fall to far'... You mean 'too'.I'm sorry that you feel so down. It makes me sad. :'( I hope that you're okay soon! It's a great little poem though! For some reason, i'm not too keen of this poem. I'm kind of over angst poems, but of course that's not your fault! _ It's well done. Like I said before, I hope that you're okay soon! Be positive!

Anna

Oh, I know the feeling. Well written, great job.

Direct and emotionally put.