I think this is the best way to express fear by making it into something else, like a poem. Awsome job! Many people could do the same.^_^

Heya, I hope you don't mind I have some corrections you could make, though they are only suggestions - u can ignore them ^_^

The line "Fearing whats to occur" would sound better as "fearing whats to come" (simple words aren't always a tragedy.

After the last line you should include another line "Cold water". It would then read:

'And pulling me up from underneathCold water. '

Without this, the poem sounds unfinished.

Oh and the line "The wind becomes colder" should be "The wind becoming colder".

The line "And I can no longer touch the floor" would sound better in your rhyming scheme, if it was: "And I can but touch the floor".

I'm sorry if this sound like a lot, its really not, just grammatical errors. I love this overall, and well hope you agree with my comments. Tell me if you change it.

Nice work x