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galexies-away 2009-10-05 . chapter 5
That was so sweet! I am loving these little snippets of cuteness.
Lost In The Ever After 2009-01-31 . chapter 5
awe, these are cute!!
Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 5
Really River? "I...umm me too, a lot"? Taht's how he replies when Javier said Ilove you to him. How cute! Write the next chapter soon.
Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 4
So Javier and River kinda had a crush on each other before they met? Of course with the way they acted that was expected. This chapter was cute too.
Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 3
A cute chapter again. I really love your wrting.
Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 2
Didn't actually understand what happened here. But I hate River's mom. She's too thick to see how cute Javier is.
Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 1
How cute. javier and River are really cute together.
i-see-faeries 2009-01-13 . chapter 5
Was so happy to see this. Love the original, love this. Hope to see more!
rayray 2008-12-04 . chapter 3
ahh, i love explainations...lol
rayray 2008-12-04 . chapter 2
what the heck? his fingers are red then yellow? it this blood? did he press really hard on his eye/face or something? i have no idea what is going on in this drabble.
Jester08 2008-10-26 . chapter 5
Nice job!! ^_^
forbiddenstars 2008-05-22 . chapter 5
aww...
you know, i don't think i've ever loved a character as much as i love javier and river (what unique names, by the way!)

i noticed you haven't updated/posted any new stories about them...could you be bribed to do so (i will review! ...or i have money...?)XD

anyway, what i'm saying is that you are an amazing writer and i particularly love these characters.

neverstopwriting.
totallyinspired 2008-04-04 . chapter 5
this is great but some of the angsty chapters are a bit hard to follow. maybe its just because im just incredibly slow, as my friends do not fail to point out.
Unrecognizable 2008-03-09 . chapter 5
I was re-reading Burning Paper Houses today and remembering how much I enjoyed it the first time. I liked these little snippets too, those two are just so lovable. I know you haven't posted on FP in years but do you still post fiction on your livejournal? I'd be curious to know.
Lovedward48 2008-02-24 . chapter 5
I can't get enough of River and Javier! I love those little one shots!!XD Thx
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