 galexies-away 2009-10-05 . chapter 5That was so sweet! I am loving these little snippets of cuteness. |
 Lost In The Ever After 2009-01-31 . chapter 5awe, these are cute!! |
 Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 5Really River? "I...umm me too, a lot"? Taht's how he replies when Javier said Ilove you to him. How cute! Write the next chapter soon. |
 Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 4So Javier and River kinda had a crush on each other before they met? Of course with the way they acted that was expected. This chapter was cute too. |
 Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 3A cute chapter again. I really love your wrting. |
 Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 2Didn't actually understand what happened here. But I hate River's mom. She's too thick to see how cute Javier is. |
 Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 1How cute. javier and River are really cute together. |
 i-see-faeries 2009-01-13 . chapter 5Was so happy to see this. Love the original, love this. Hope to see more! |
 rayray 2008-12-04 . chapter 3 ahh, i love explainations...lol |
 rayray 2008-12-04 . chapter 2 what the heck? his fingers are red then yellow? it this blood? did he press really hard on his eye/face or something? i have no idea what is going on in this drabble. |
 Jester08 2008-10-26 . chapter 5Nice job!! ^_^ |
 forbiddenstars 2008-05-22 . chapter 5 aww...
you know, i don't think i've ever loved a character as much as i love javier and river (what unique names, by the way!)
i noticed you haven't updated/posted any new stories about them...could you be bribed to do so (i will review! ...or i have money...?)XD
anyway, what i'm saying is that you are an amazing writer and i particularly love these characters.
neverstopwriting. |
 totallyinspired 2008-04-04 . chapter 5this is great but some of the angsty chapters are a bit hard to follow. maybe its just because im just incredibly slow, as my friends do not fail to point out. |
 Unrecognizable 2008-03-09 . chapter 5I was re-reading Burning Paper Houses today and remembering how much I enjoyed it the first time. I liked these little snippets too, those two are just so lovable. I know you haven't posted on FP in years but do you still post fiction on your livejournal? I'd be curious to know. |
 Lovedward48 2008-02-24 . chapter 5 I can't get enough of River and Javier! I love those little one shots!!XD Thx |