|Reviews for Everything and The Moon|
| euphorictragedy 9/9/05 . chapter 16
I'm so glad they'r going to have a baby! I suspected it would be soon since they obviously didn't have contreceptives back then, or if they did they didn't use them, lol! I think it would suck to get pregnant after just getting married, but that's just me.
| Unangelichalo 9/9/05 . chapter 16
Oh, Claves, I LOVE this!
So cute! PUPPY! Hehe.
| The 2nd Mrs de Winter 9/8/05 . chapter 16
Hi, I have to say that I'm really surprised that this story isn't over . . . I don't know what else needs to happen . . .
This story has a major flaw and that is that most romances have a major problem keeping the two lovers apart, but this one doesn't. It is just more about two people coming together, and that is just fine if you are then going to tear them apart. I think that maybe you should have talked a little bit more about Jenny's rape experience, or Michael’s inability to commit.
I really do like this story and I'm really glad that you did finish off the trilogy, but the characters of Jenny and Michael really don't have much in common with their characters from "The Wallflower." They seem almost like they could be completely different people. Well, I'm sorry if I'm being kind of harsh, because I really do enjoy reading this story, but it just doesn't seem up to par in comparison to your other Evencout stories. "With You," is by far the best and "The Wallflower" is a nice read also, but this one just doesn't have the same spark, and now you seem to be dragging it out . . .
I know, it's really strange, but I think that I'm the only person reviewing on this site who will actually tell an author of a story that I enjoy to cut a story short. I just hate it when writes jump the shark, and to me it seems like you are really close.
Well, I look forward for more and I really do like this story. I don't know why, but I have been really harsh for the last few weeks, so sorry.
Well, update soon.
| the devil herself 9/7/05 . chapter 1
ok its about time i'f been checking 4 ages u are by fare the best writer ( other than me) in my books so i'll look forward to reading all about michaelthe devil herself
| Tortugapoet 9/6/05 . chapter 15
AW! YAY! I LOVED IT! And I'm glad it's not over yet. Sorry it took so long to review, the last time I was on the computer I was getting the sneak peek of this chapter from you! Lol. Life's been a little crazy. But it's all good. I'll see if you're on AIM... -Drea
| joank 9/3/05 . chapter 15
You said review, so here it is.I loved the trilogy! Every minute of it! Write another! And maybe put it on .com so we can purchase a bound copy. :)
As a side note, in a wedding, should anything happen to the groom, the best man would step in and the wedding would go on...
| The 2nd Mrs de Winter 9/3/05 . chapter 15
a sweet chapter, please update soon!
| ElvislivesAgain 9/3/05 . chapter 15
Claves I loved it, it was wondeful, simply wonderful! Thats all I had to say:D
| euphorictragedy 9/3/05 . chapter 15
Men are so horny! It's hilarious! This chapter was nice. I liked how u didn't drone on with the wedding nuptuals. They are so boring! But, it turned out great.
| CheesyBiscuits 9/3/05 . chapter 15
haha! i love that last line! I love James so much, are you gonna make a stroy revolving around him? anyways, Yes! they're FINALLY married! update soon1
| Belle 9/3/05 . chapter 1
Haven't read your story yet, but I was wondering if you've read Everything and the Moon, by Julia Quinn?
| BangBangYourDead 9/3/05 . chapter 15
Ahh.. lovely chapter.
| Unangelichalo 9/3/05 . chapter 15
Oh, Claves, I LOVED this!
T'was so cute!
Update soon! (There is an update, right?)
| Tortugapoet 8/29/05 . chapter 14
You out-do yourself everytime. It has to be the BEST I've ever read of yours! I loved it! BAD MENTAL IMAGES! I swear, I did that the other day. Lol. Good news! My computer is back! The dinosaur lives! Hurray! So, we shall have a chat soon, hopefully. But I am back in school, so it'll be a weekend. :D Again, I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! Rock on clavster! -Drea
| The 2nd Mrs de Winter 8/29/05 . chapter 14
Another good chapter, update soon.