Reviews for Orrenyl's Rival - FictionPress.com

Desertman 2005-07-14 ch 1,	abusei liked this story alot ^_^ even though it was just a little slow.
StoryJunkie 2005-07-13 ch 1,	abuse1st person is really pendantic. your story moves slower than molasses.. is that drow character something someone else made up? I've heard of it before. if so, this is a fan fiction, not an original work. try submitting this at fanfiction.net. It looks as if you put a lot of thought and love into it. Try doing it in a different voice, as if you are outside looking in. an observer...