 Soulshifter 2005-07-14 . chapter 1Heh, 'cuz I already told you I was gonna write one like that. Yeah I'll give you a cookie for kicks.
Btw, a demon is a fallen angel... So the term "demonic angel" is rather redundant. Just thought you'd like to know. Good poem though. The title just bugs me. |
 Inherent 2005-07-14 . chapter 1This one is also really good. You can really picture it in your mind and relate to it. I love poems like that. |
 Lunerith 2005-07-14 . chapter 1I think this is a very good poem
IMOIt greatly symbolizes conflicting emotions. That could be about anything, so I think many people could relate.
Wonderful workHave a Good Life |
 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-07-13 . chapter 1Wow...talk about a twisted poem...but it was really good. Shadows on the wall, huh? Well i loved this poem and it says it all brilliantly, well done ^-^ |
 Debbie-chan 2005-07-13 . chapter 1It's good. The rhyme scheme is a bit off in some places. It would be better if it didn't rhyme. But still, (as I always say) this is a GOOD POEM! |
 penumbral 2005-07-13 . chapter 1'darkest angels, Kind devils'
Beautiful. I love it. |