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Reviews For: Submerse Love Is Water That Will Drown Us

Red Masque
2005-07-14
ch 1,
abusei think i liked this better than 'last love,' actually. for some reason, the descriptions don't read too cumbersomely (new word). it really... kinda reads like a prose poem.

joli ^^rm
Jahar
2005-07-14
ch 1,
abuseWow.

Hurry up and continue! This sounds really good. Excellent use of words; they seemed to just flow.
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