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| Red Masque 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abusei think i liked this better than 'last love,' actually. for some reason, the descriptions don't read too cumbersomely (new word). it really... kinda reads like a prose poem. joli ^^rm |
| Jahar 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Hurry up and continue! This sounds really good. Excellent use of words; they seemed to just flow. |