 jus-me 2005-08-22 . chapter 13YOU UPDATED? wow...sorry it took me so long to get to reading it. lol. well its was awesome as usual... waiting for more.
Cass |
 poetic abortion 2005-08-22 . chapter 13WONDERFUL chapter, echo. I love it, the writing has greatly improved and has just touched my heart! lovely work as always, your work is always inspiring.
~* noelle |
 star blanket river child 2005-08-20 . chapter 13"Tatoos, piercings, muscles, oh my!" Haha, funny. The kicked a car thing amused me, too. It just sounds so LAME. Poor Alex. (One thing- did you change Max's name to Jess? ... either that or there's an affair being thrown in. Which would be annoying.) My favorite part was the ending, lmao. Very hot. ;) (FLASHBACKS!) Jess is some tease. It's quite sexy. Anyway, great chapter, update as soon as you can! ^.^ |
 SayIt'sWrong 2005-08-20 . chapter 13Good chapter, but I'm a bit confused did I miss something? I can't remember Jess being introduced? Anyway continue cos this story rock! QueenVixta |
 star blanket river child 2005-08-15 . chapter 12Oh, GOD, that's sad. What the hell is with the jail thing?! Would they really arrest you for that? Crazy. Anyway, I can't wait for you to update! But take your time, no rush. I'm lazy too, lol. Great work, I like how this is progressing. You rock! :D |
 Crazy-Word-Painter 2005-08-15 . chapter 11 Oh dear, oh dear. Poor Alex. "The teacher even asked me if I was supposed to be there" is a totally funny line. Very nice. The ending nearly made me cry. His letter was so sad. Oh dear, I hope things improve soon! |
 SayIt'sWrong 2005-07-31 . chapter 12Aww poor Alex bless! I hope you post more really soon cos I really need to read more! Keep up the good work! QueenVixta |
 jus-me 2005-07-29 . chapter 12ah..ok I understand your reason for not updating...but I'm interested. Well either way I'll be waiting for the next chap. and I promise to review. Anyhow onto the story... you put him in Jail? wow. Is Em gonna come save him? ...
Waiting,Cass |
 jus-me 2005-07-28 . chapter 11eh you are updating too slow...and driving me crazy! lol...wait? maybe I was already crazy? anyhow onto the review... is Alex coming home soon? he better!! and u need to update sooner...lol.
Always,Cass |
 Fresher then Mint 2005-07-25 . chapter 10Well that's depressing, poor Alex *sigh* I just wanna hug him!
It would be fun with Max and Shawn *wink wink* |
 SayIt'sWrong 2005-07-24 . chapter 10Unexpected twist there! Continue soon please! queenvixta |
 jus-me 2005-07-23 . chapter 10WOW...a lil unexpected. Ben likes Alex? eh... i thought Em finally had a boyfriend? So now hes gonna run away? She just lost Ben and now shes losing Alex thats gonna suck for her! Whats shes supposed to do now? he better come back! Wheres he going? ugh... a whole 10 seconds older? lol. thats cute. Ah well I loved it as usual. But update sooner... please...you held us in suspense too long..lol.
Always,Cass |
 Crazy-Word-Painter 2005-07-23 . chapter 10 I WANT FLASHBACKS! :D Lol! Aw, why CAN'T you turn them all gay for me? *pouts* I'm special! Anyway, lol. "Even though we were twins, I was older by a whole 10 seconds. And sometimes, that older brother in me kicks in, wanting to protect her." That was really cute/sweet/aw! Lol, I loved it. Now hold on- WHAT THE HELL?! BEN LIKES ALEX?! OH MY GOD! NOW WHERE IS HE GOING?! OH JESUS CHRIST, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?! Poor Emma! That was a totally unexpected twist... *glare* You took too long to update! Don't let it happen again! ^.^ Great chapter! |
 SayIt'sWrong 2005-07-19 . chapter 9Aw cute! So is Alex gonna get addicted? Are Emma and Ben gonna get together? I'm very intrigues. Write more soon!! queenvixta |
 SayIt'sWrong 2005-07-19 . chapter 8Omg good chapter! This is getting better by the chapter! Ugh some people are so horrible. I want the whole Ben and Emma thing to work tho! I hope he wasnt behind it all. keep up the good work. queenvixta |