whoa...total unexpected ending there. but this one is deep and sad. you wrote it very well and the rhyme is awesome

~Sorrow~

Wow. Beautiful in every sense of the word. and a bit angry to.

Your word visuals and how you lay your poems out are positively amazing. Feels like the 'character' in this is debating with him/herself and it's very riveting.

Regret, Betrayal, Denial, Want, Need. Lust.

I swear it was the last time.

just like the time before.

its very true.

Capturing, a delight.

loved it.

reminds me of another romance swept past.

love it. it's gorgeous! especially how you divide the two sides to it in two columns. nicely done!

lav, this is beautiful. the poem left me breathless and gave me so much pain, and heart ache. easily relatable and that doesn't blemish the power in your words.

~* noelle

original and abstract. awesome poem!

I love the shock of emotions with the cold and warmth. All-consuming (absorption) of lust/intoxication. Splendid.