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Reviews For: The Baby Experiements

MusicallyBrainwashed
2006-05-30
ch 1,
abuseNo! Not the baby! This is a pretty neat format you used. I like it. ^_^
lain / cyberbird
2006-03-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseThat was pretty intense. I like how you write about realistic topics such as this. Good job. Also, you did really well for you first time writing in second person :)
un-in-hibited
2005-07-23
ch 3,
abusethis entire collection was very well written. i hope you update soon, i'd like to read more.
CyberBird
2005-07-17
ch 3,
abuseI can't imagine doing that to my mother, but most definatly my father, he cages me from everything, therefore it's easy for me to relate (kinda) in this chapter. Excellent job in this chapter. “Did he brainwash you?” My friends mother says that to her all the time, her parents are seperated and she can't stand her mother so therefore that's what her mother says.
CyberBird
2005-07-16
ch 2,
abuse7:45PM – that one part gave me chills, wow that’s really well written, excellent job I can’t wait for the next chapter ^_^
CyberBird
2005-07-14
ch 1,
abuseOh! That's so depressing! Who would do that to their child!! I dont care if you wanted it or not it's her responsibility! Awesome job on portraying the whole concept of it. It really makes you think twice about doing things, whether that be having sex etc etc, great job hope to see more - ta ta
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