wow, i like it. definitely wanting more...update...NOW! hm...thinking...i need more more more...but its very good.. i likes it!

Eep. Those trogs have to be some of the creepiest things I've read about in awhile. Now I'm going to be imagining them everywhere. :(.

Great job with the story. But...but...no update? And you ended on such a cliffie, too! Why is he deaf? Hopefully, we'll find out?

Neato story; very well-written. I'll have to give you an Alert for this one. Can't wait to find out what happens to poor old Neil. And man, those Trog things give me the creeps. They make me think of Oompa Loompas from that whacko Johnny Depp movie (not sure why)...

Really cool story you got here. Very original idea. It's got me extremely intrigued. Please continue!

A good and interesting setting. The setting is creepy indeed.

Oh boy, looks like that Trog's got it in for Neil. Man, I wish the chapter wasn't so short so I could find out what happens next! I'm really liking how this is going, so you HAVE to update really soon!

~RoseSama35~ Love&Peace and world domination to your Queen!

Oh, intriguing. So far I like it. Looks like it's going to be great. Will definitely check out the next chapter. Happy writing!

Oh, so far I like this. I get sort of an M. Night Shymalon feeling from this, if you know what I mean. Sort of like The Village. I already interested in the story that you have developing and the mysteries that are already presenting themselves. Keep up the good work and I'll be on the look-out for it's update!

~RoseSama35~