creepy...ur mind is dark

As you said yourself, you can be very messed up. I do like the turning a dark story comical with the "you've got red on you" line. Its verry fitting for you.

~Scott~

OOh i liked the interchange of 3rd person to 1st. Very nice twist. Well written, seems very synister.

So sad. But really good. That's really all I seem to say, but I can't really think of anything else to describe it.