|Reviews for The Dance|
| Colt 8/9/05 . chapter 1
O.o Descriptive powers...overwhelming... *falls backwards off chair*Jamie: ...forgive Colt, the lack of brainpower isn't helping the general sing sing! Life is a dance you learn as you go!
| blonde-and-blubbering-one 7/23/05 . chapter 1
Very scary. Now I feel like I will most definantly know what you are doing. Its so real, has a kind of dark beauty to it.
| I miss you most when I'm alone 7/18/05 . chapter 1
ohh i really like this one..i like the dance the dance the dance of life and then how later you say the dance of death narrowing rings..it's very lovely..also thank you for your suggestion!xx chelsea
| miasmas too lazy to sign in 7/15/05 . chapter 1
It's catchy. I love it!
| fragglerock 7/14/05 . chapter 1
Wow; that was really cool! I read it in sort of a chant way, and it flowed wonderfully!
| InMemoryofPhil 7/14/05 . chapter 1
Marvelous job. I like the one-word lines, it gets the feeling across without having to go for lines to describe it.
Me (AKA Ty from Clodhopper)
| Drea-le-Fox 7/14/05 . chapter 1
It has a suspence to it, I can't really discribe it...