the passion and emotion you write with just comes off with every word, this poem really touched me, and i hope things with you and your sibling turn out okay!

This is really good and it flows really well. Very well written. queenvixta

"I think I might be ableTo take a little diveAnd fall away so deepInto this broken night"

this is amzing...i love this line and i love the way you vented so much and were so honest but i'm sure if ur sister read this she'd know that at the end of the day you love her no matter what...but anyway well done, this is amazing, so fabulous. lots of love AllyCred

that must've sucked.. nice poem.. i really love that first stanza.. great job

i really liked how you end and begin the poem.

"I think I might be able/ To take a little dive/ And fall away so deep/ Into this broken night"

i love how you weave imagery with little bits of wisdom, and personal philosophy. it really makes the poem intimate.

Great poem, you are really talented to hold the ability to rhyme so well!:p. Lovely structure. I really like this poem, and so shall add it too my favourite stories list!:P