Hmm... I love this song a lot. Also I am trying to imagine another female voice following the verses. Interesting conept, I may play on it myself.

I enjoyed it but I think it would be better without the Evanescence, then it is truely yours.

It was good. But the song by Evanescence is Taking Over Me, not I Believe in you. Just thought you might like to know. But other than that I like the lines you added.