This really sounds like you would write it...it fits you perfectly...but...to my noleadge your a virgin...how would you know how it feels...but...i could be wrong...i love poems...i always did...but as for a dude i have to be all manly like...even though i dont have that tough guy thing anymore...but its good we have something in comon...well...best wishes with this... sincerly: your friend Ryan F.

hardcore lol... neway great job... very... raw... but good...

well...the rating seems more appropriate now...very dark...i love it...and the metal music...ah!...anywho...keep it up...

TheBrokenWanderer