good imagry. I love how you said "the wings of fate" and "the shadows beyond" good job and KW!

Davida

Definatly a favourite. The last stanza is breathtaking. The descriptions are beautiful, the whole idea is cleverly dark, and everything about this peice seems so ancient...so...right. Lovely.

you've really mastered the rhyme scheme. and your pieces really play on your readers' emotions too. everytime i read something of yours, my mood changes depending on the poem. awesome work 0)

It makes me shiver, makes me want to cry. I can't explain it. But i love it.

wow...i cant find a lot to say except...well...wow! i like it and keep writing!PB

unique & worthwhile

nice flow...intricately done descriptions...i enjoyed this piece..keep writing D

that was really wonderful. it's so good i think a person could win with it in a speech competition! :) wonderful.

Hi there, Mizu no Kokoro. This is a lovely poem you're written. I love the black and silver images it lends to my mind as I read it. Beautiful and eloquent.

I quite appreciate you leaving a comment on my poem "Passive". However, it is with much regret that I must inform you that it has been half a year since I decided that I was no longer able to write at FictionPress due to unavoidable circumstances. But be sure to keep writing, because I will CERTAINLY continue reviewing!

FR

Beautiful and loverly poem. PS, thanks for the reviews.

dark..and sad..but very good. Touched me as I read it all the way to the end. I can hear such pain in this..but yet the happiness to it as well.

Sorrow

beautiful.. i like the title a lot.. ncie poem

Oh! It's got that enchanted tone you always seem to portray. Very nicely done.

beautiful work, as always. the description and word choice is wonderful. the poem is deep. great work. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

I liked it. It read almost like an epic poem. Good imagery.