GREAT STORY! they should make a zombie movie like this...update more thanks

i love u and this stroy! only this is wit getting hope published (im very sry 2 tell u this) its already been published on the internet, so u cant really get a deal... i no this b/c i dont put some things on fiction press b/c im hoping that 1 day i could get it some place big, b/c 1ce its on fiction press... its almost imposible

well, I LOVE THIS STROY, keep it up ;)

OK i liked the story but I really don't think Ember is a werid name at all. That and it's weird how her last name is Jacobs..and that she drives a red mustang...its a good story!

Ember Jacobs..by the way i drive a silver mustang!

I LOVE IT!

i was waiting 4ever 4 ur update! FINALLY! i dont really have much 2 say other than... UPDATE SOON!

Ph3@R! I liked this story. Zombies are kewl.

Holy **! Zombies scare the ** out of me. I think they are the most terrifying, most gory, gruesome things in the whole universe. Your story has me all traumatized and fidgety. It's great! Keep updating, and keep up the good work!

Great! The only thing is, why were Tay's parents dead? I mean, you said they came at her, zombie like, but you never said why they were dead to begin with. Same with Dawn.

O come on dont just leave us hangin lol I thought it was really good cant wait to read more

Your story is really addicting lol

This is a cool ch cant wait to read the next ttyl bye

Three words: UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE. :)

Oh..interesting chapter!

Um...YES, I would definitely like you to CONTINUE THIS STORY. Duh, don't leave all your readers hanging!! :) Haha. Well, great first chapter, I'm hooked.

well written- but the same fear remains... is this going to be original? :S good luck!

hehe, well i liked the whole secret japanese room... but now im kinda fearing you're gonna give it a touch of kill bill too...?