I don't think it's horribly written,but I did not feel it,it did not jump out and grab done anyway.

Well well well...making another review in one morning, I'm getting far too much free time on tuesdays.

) I'm an avid admirer..er? I'll have to look up spelling for that, deary me.

You really hit the mark on visionary symbols here. The look, the stance, the flower, the hand.

I like the way the shild moves on from grief, into envy, and then a little angsty nearer to the end.

Another great poem. )

very nice, i like it alot