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| your sweet suicide 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abusewow, that is really good, keep it up |
| under estimated artistsoul 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAll your feelings are completely shown in this incredible piece. Wanting to be an angel. This is absolutely astonishing. Going to my fav. stories. |
| simpleplan13 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. i love the rain part & the lost wings.. it's a very bittersweet poem.. beautiful job |
| J.T.Moore 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abusei dont quite understand it but it made me cry it reminds me of my friend who last year comminted suicide and now she is an angel my gaurdien angel |
| gn0sis 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very beautiful poem. The only other thing I would reccomend is to do some research on what angels really are, are like, and do. Popular culture has it all wrong. Good job! |
| Lurking-Shadow 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was really nicely written. It's better than i thought it'd be, (from the summary). As a reader, I can feel your regret, and your longing to go back to the past. Good work. |