beautiful descriptions... very sweet poem... i can relate... great job... short, but beautiful

It was very good, you started out smoothly then got really deep around the middle."The river sings of tears and broken hearts;

a tear so pure, so torn apart

But innocent blood bleeds upon your soul,

that second half that makes me whole"thats my favorite part. keep it up!

Yes! Awesomeness! You wrote something! IT's great to see new work.1. This is a love poem, I'm shocked.2. This isn't corny at all.3. This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful in every description.4. I think you've done a great job. 5. This Glen guy is lucky to have you feel this way and have you write this about him.Don't be a stranger, I always love reading your work.

This was good, despite you claiming not knowing how to write love poems (hell, I can't write ANY kind of poem).That Glen...he's a lucky guy! ~*Crazy Baiko*~