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| Rin0a 2005-07-31 ch 1,   | yes, people are getting more and more paranoid nowadays that they don't even realize what beauty the world has yet to offer. *sighs* pity. anyway, good poem! this is really excellent. by the way, thanks for reviewing my works. they're very much appreciated. =D |
| Cinera 2005-07-20 ch 1, | I can't say I've ever thought about our world like that, but when you do, it makes sense. Fear is the beginning of all things. People hate what they fear. That's a good outlook. Thanks for all those reviews by the way. |
| Lurking-Shadow 2005-07-19 ch 1, | The first part of the poem with the fear was interesting and thought-provoking. However, the second part was somewhat disappointing, especially the ending, because it ended rather typically. Also I would've liked for you to go into more details about the "broken lives" mentioned in your title. Overall, it was an okay poem. |
| blackoutroses 2005-07-19 ch 1, | this poem is reflective yet at the same time has some personal touch, i think that's what makes it stand out and make the reader4 emphatise. nicely done! |
| Infection 2005-07-18 ch 1, | this was a real good poem, full of emotion and felling. it was amazing. |
| waitandhope 2005-07-18 ch 1, | It makes me sad, but I guess that's the point. We are kind of doomed, even if there is hope. Well, gorgeous poem, anyway. |
| Captivated Rose 2005-07-17 ch 1, | I like this. It's sort of dark, but not in the twisted way. More in the "this is a fact" way. Y'know? Thanks for reviewing my writing, BTW. I appreciate it. (: |
| citrus scented 2005-07-17 ch 1, | wow, very touching and heartfelt poem. you sound very passionate about it, and it comes across really well. some great, thoughtprovoking lines in this. wonderful poem. i like the slight hope at the end. |
| Aryanda 2005-07-15 ch 1, | i agree with the last three lines. there is hope. there will always be hope. no one can deny us that. this is a really awesome poem...i would add it to my fav. list...but i kinda reached the limit. oh, and thank you SO MUCH for reviewing all my stuff. wow, it just really made my day...and my week...and my month...and THANK YOU! i can't tell you how grateful i am. wonderful poem, as i said. keep it up. |