Nice work. I like the sound of the first 2 lines. Reminds me of a lot of people in the world today. Keep writing! :)

Another great poem , though it's short there's always somerthing about your poem that is so intresting and i love the rymings.

It's so simple and fantastic. I like it. -Drea. Also, thank you for your review.

its simplicity and rhyming lines make it awesome. its a very good poem.

EB

It makes me think of a fairytale too =)