That is SO sad! I really empathise with him, it would be even better if he died to protect someone, like a girlfriend

That's a good story. I think you started to rush a bit though. You could have made the last few chapters a bit longer, but whatever suites you. Hah, you've got me inspired to write a story about WWII, Holocaust, and ,Sam

This is a good story. You show the emotions very good, but some pieces are kind of rushed. Try not to use a comma in nearly every scentense, it makes reading very hard. Keep up the good work!

xDutch Girl

very cool, you make it sound so real. this persons life is captured so well thus far.

Solo.

wow, very awesome, and I love how it seems like a journal entry, I'm starting at the beginning so it may take some time for the pther chapters to be reviewed. Well Done.

Solo.