Reviews for maybe in your debt

Reviews For: maybe in your debt

Manuel Fajar 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abuseRead up on bonobos, they may console you. m (p.s. if everyone's so sane why is the world insane?)
Aimee Raven 2005-08-05 ch 1,	abuseOh...I adore this...it's so..sigh faves list the subject of this poem is closer to me than that of most your other stuff, which is probably why I like it so much. you always cast these incredible images..."i could pick your remainsfrom my teeth with a twenty-foot toothpickand just throw you up after" i admire you! Love, Mia
the naked civil servant 2005-07-26 ch 1,	abusei love... well, all of it, really. i was going to say something pretentious about metric and stylistic devices, but that's all shite as you well know. it's got passion, it's honest, and it's real.
lostontheroof 2005-07-22 ch 1,	abuseWonderful as always. Another poem that speaks the truth beautifully.
Weeba 2005-07-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is very powerful, and unusually true-to-life. I think the emotions are just in that grey area between generic and specific that make them very easy to identify with; I'm not quite sure I know what you're talking about, but that gives me the freedom to make my own decision about that. This is one of the few times when little explanation and lots of emotion is ok, even preferrable. Good job. Keep writing! ~Weeba~
Livvy 2005-07-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI only noticed the name change now! Silly me...I'm so used to getting here from your ellejay. Hecate? Is she your new muse? I know my sister's is called Circe Calypso, and Zeggy's is Callisto...sort of...ACP, wasn't it? Evil! Teehee!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-17 ch 1,	abuseAngsty but sincere.
rei 2005-07-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseho melly. i like the last stanza too. oh and the first one. anw it's a little like a song? hoho.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-07-16 ch 1,	abuseyou are not at all annoying. and you change your names like I change clothes. but you have an amazing gift. and I can't believe you're just 14. wow. pretty good, even if it wasn't your best, it was still worthy of say, an A.
myno 2005-07-16 ch 1,	abuseanother name change? this poem is rather different from your usual style... hm...
alligater20 2005-07-16 ch 1,	abuseOoh I love it! Great descriptions plus your great writing = great poem. Bravo I love it =)
Arcane D. 2005-07-16 ch 1,	abuseExcellent. The thing I enjoy about your poetry is that you tend to play around with abstract metaphors. Though some lines feel rather awkward, I have to say the last stanza certainly made up for it. I also see where the "forgive me" lines come into play but it doesn't seem to flow with the subject at hand. Abstract, powerful and props for the ideal. -Arcane Devices (a.k.a. ADD)
Laiqualaurelote 2005-07-16 ch 1, anon.	abuse'Tis very angsty - not your best, I think. A bit repetitive (you know, like the 'My Best Friend is An Angst Monster') The last stanza is the best one, I daresay. It's nice the way you always go into statistics.
Ohmm 2005-07-16 ch 1,	abuseI don't think it's your best because uhh, I don't like the repetition all that much =X. But the metaphor in the last stanza was good! =)

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