About time I reviewed this one. I've read it so many times! The rhyming is excellent and the emotion inside it are wonderful. Maybe even perfect. If only it could go on the spotlight. Then maybe some modern rich guy will start donating to charity, etc. Oh well. You never know what might happen.

you have some really good words rhyming here- i can tell that you really thought it through instead of just putting in something that fits the rhyme scheme but doesn't really sound all that great. i love this. great work.

This is really, really good. It's pretty sad, but really bittersweet.

From what I can intepret from it...it's about someone who has been always there for you. But now, this person is facing difficulties, or going through a rough patch, but isn't turning to you for help or comfort...and you're feeling helpless that you can't help this person.

This is a very powerful peice...meaning is simple to understand (from what I can see, anyway) and the emotions injected in it is very good.

"Have some faith in me, I pray…" This last line. Awesome. Impactful, and as I've said, bittersweet. Hope you work things out with this person...if what I've intepreted is true. =)