Wow ... I loved the subtle way you connected the various chapters ;) nice work.

Life or at least a few stages of it. I really enjoyed it. There was only one mistake I saw in the entire story:In ch8 "...that Steve would know who they were friends." Also that sentence seems very run on.I loved the description of music in ch6. This review has taken 10 minutes to write and I still haven't given you all the praise you deserve. Oh well until later...