Reviews for Our Father Who Art in Heaven
newfoundhope 7/2/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem, very inspirational-adding to favorites.
marshbar960 8/13/05 . chapter 1
essentially, the message of this poem is that we should learn to show compassion and empathize with one another, rather than judge and scorn. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. at any rate, thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
darqlyte 8/6/05 . chapter 1
Very true what you say in the first part. All together it's encouraging. Keep writting!

God Bless.

-darqlyte
agirlnamed-aly 8/5/05 . chapter 1
That. Was. Amazing.

Powerful, insightful, and emotional. The Preamble was a bit slow, but the story you being to tell, entwined with the underlying prayer, is incredible and engaging.

Great work!
catseyeview 7/25/05 . chapter 1
thank for writing this. I will carry it through my day and dwell there. Some parts are just lovely and others just ask you to be human. Very nice.
simpleplan13 7/23/05 . chapter 1
wow... awesome
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/20/05 . chapter 1
what a wonderful poem. telling a story while praying. what a truly wonderful poem.
Nobody-n-Particular 7/17/05 . chapter 1
Wow, absolutely stunning. Most definitely a fav...