|Reviews for Our Father Who Art in Heaven|
| newfoundhope 7/2/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem, very inspirational-adding to favorites.
| marshbar960 8/13/05 . chapter 1
essentially, the message of this poem is that we should learn to show compassion and empathize with one another, rather than judge and scorn. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. at any rate, thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!
| darqlyte 8/6/05 . chapter 1
Very true what you say in the first part. All together it's encouraging. Keep writting!
| agirlnamed-aly 8/5/05 . chapter 1
That. Was. Amazing.
Powerful, insightful, and emotional. The Preamble was a bit slow, but the story you being to tell, entwined with the underlying prayer, is incredible and engaging.
| catseyeview 7/25/05 . chapter 1
thank for writing this. I will carry it through my day and dwell there. Some parts are just lovely and others just ask you to be human. Very nice.
| simpleplan13 7/23/05 . chapter 1
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 7/20/05 . chapter 1
what a wonderful poem. telling a story while praying. what a truly wonderful poem.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/17/05 . chapter 1
Wow, absolutely stunning. Most definitely a fav...