*is stunned* It gave me the chills. This was beautiful. I can think of nothing to say but beautiful... oh there is amazing too! ~Paige

He-hey! I've read this one!

Same thing as before, darkly beautyful. Like one of those people, who you see without their make-up and your all like oh well they ain't so cute then you see them WITH make-up and you're like whoa you're hot and you'd do anything for them.

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yah... Like dat!

wow! amazing poem! the setting is great and the imagery is fantastic! i love the last verse with the metaphors and rhyming. thanx for ur review, and it kinda made me laugh 'cos i didnt really say all that stuff. i only hav guts when im on the internet and not actually facing the person. but still, thanx anyway and keep up the awesome work!

OMG I love it!! Its so evil, yet beautiful. It really describes the lusting side of love. Its so black and haunting.. great! Keep writing... x

the whole poem was wonderful, especially the breaking of the stanzas and the one stanza "her skin is silk...of stolen souls"...that was really wonderful imagery...keep up the good work...

~TheBrokenWanderer~

A beautifully tragic poem, loved it, though I thought the last four lines could have been better written, still an awesome poem

Jaded and sincerely confused,SwimmerGirl