Reading this was like reliving memories. It's so weird how people that you've never met can recite to you, your life's story. It was really good. I liked how you described 'the child's' eyes as they decided they didn't want to forget lost love. Amazing work! *read more*

I loved it. It was kind of confusing going back and forth from side to side, but quite interesting and unique as well. Nice job.

Why is it so depressing?!?! It's written in what could be a fairy-tale form, but... it almost makes you want to rip your heart out to stop feeling!

Damn your good.

Perhaps the most brilliant poem I've ever read and contemplated. Seemed to me to be a discussion between someone and his conscience (or heart?) Beautifully done

Jaded,SwimmerGirl

aw...thanx so much for the sweet review! some sicko sent me a really stupid review so i was feeling kinda depressed but ur review cheered me up, as did my friends. this poem is absolutely awesome! i mean, the layout is great, the way u justified it and the way the whole thing is like a painfully sad story. i liked the middle, where it says 'do u want 2 forget?' great imagery and altho quite sad, a wonderful poem! thanx again for the sweet review!