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| futago>akuma-tenshi01 2005-09-04 ch 3,  | abuseAh, some more of your exellent story...Owen and Dew are very cold to Issac...in fact, Issac isn't getting very much sympathy from anyone... |
| Chainlinks 2005-09-04 ch 3, | abuseI like Kou and Dew. Isaac and Owen are still growing on me, but I'll develop a proper liking for them eventally. Really it's the plot more than the characters that have me grinning and sitting on the edge of my seat! I love it! |
| xenocaster 2005-09-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseanother good chapter. THANKYOU! |
| Wickedsix 2005-08-31 ch 2, | abuseYay! Another intruiging start to a story from you! I am excited. |
| xanthofile 2005-08-08 ch 2, | abusewow, i'm completely blown away by this! all these strange occurences, and hardly any answers...it's leaving me gripping my seat anxiously. i hope the next installment of this is rather forthcoming. |
| xenocaster 2005-08-07 ch 2, | abusethat was good. keep up the exelent job you've been doing on this one! *glomps story* |
| QianYun 2005-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAfter reading the majority of your fanfiction and finally stopping on this one, I felt it was imperative that I should indicate somehow that you gained yet another fan. Your writing is absoltuely lovely and your story-telling even more magnificent. You can so easily write so many different kinds of stories without any of them blending together in any way whatsoever, that I am immensely curious as to how this story will turn out. Your characters, even in this first part, already seem like the type for readers to fall in love with. I've already been caught up in the story and anxiously await the further developments of the story involving Issac. I bet it would be brilliant any such way. Thank you for posting your stories on Fiction Press and keep up the great work. You are truly one-of-a-kind. |
| futago>akuma-tenshi01 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseGoodly story, as always... |
| Chainlinks 2005-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm not entirely sure that I like this story -- then again, didn't I say something similar when you first started "Taking These Chances"? I feel a little distanced from Isaac at this point in the story, and the rest of the characters aren't much better. I don't have much of an idea of what's going on, but I don't think I'm supposed to at this point. I did, of course, like the pink ninja suit. I would have been sad to see it go, but then you described the scent of toast and spice and I couldn't help but grin because it seemed to fit so well. |
| CloudySky 2005-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting start. I'm rather glad the 'chapter' didn't stop at just the prologue, that might have been a bit confusing. In these first two chapters you've left enough clues to get at least an idea of what's going on, and I look forward to reading more. |
| Banana Chopsticks 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abusehumm, i like this...you have a good writing style. but work on the character development i think, i'd like to know more about them. write more, good job |
| Gia18 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat beginning so far! I look forward to reading more! |
| xenocaster 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abusegreat start! the beginning italics lacked punctuation which made things hard to read, but at the same time added something to it. i HAVE seen this type of story before, but this is the most promising beginning i have seen. not supprising realy, considering what you have done with middleverse and such. keep it up :p |