very good play of words and lines. I like the way you repeat and emphasize the solitude and sorrow of the character

_The Wonderer

*sniff* Wonderful poem as always! I love, love, love your works! All of 'em!

-licks- I love it! Liah is very lucky. -envies-

-Remmy-

With utmost objectivit, I must express a deep sense of pleasure with regards to this topic. It's so seldom that friends inspire us to create something so beautiful as poetry. The flow, the words, the repetition is great. Please write more. :)

Wow, that was gorgeous! Great job.