Beautifully written!

omg thats so sad! :(

Aww... See, I wish I would've read this -before- I started reading 'To See the Face of God', because I already sort-of don't like Tiffany... I'm certainly going to give her a chance, though. I'll go read 'Daddy's Girl' soon. This, however, was definitely very good on its own.

I like it alot, a little confusing, btu I guess that's because I didn't read the longer version? But whatever, you do a wonderful job of displaying the character's emotions.

GAH! You know I love Tiffany to death! She's no doubt my favourite of Paul's siblings (I feel like I've said that sentence before?) And I love Paul so much, and I hate to see him hurt like this. Michael has a lot of issues, and my guess here is that he - unconsciously, perhaps - tries to see how much he can do to Paul, how far he can push him before he won't love him anymore, and if Paul STILL loves Michael after this, Michael will know that it's for real, no fake this time...

And I WANNA READ DADDY'S GIRL!

^_^ i scared my friend on yahoo after reading this out of nowhere i just started screaming how michael shouldnt have hurt paul like that and stuff yeah i think he wants to send me to a mental hospital he already though i had enouhg problems oh well stuff gets me like that and most people know i am far from normal well i am off to my little fantasy world to dream happy thoughts and kiss ponies and...woah way weird nice thingy later ^_^)/