Hi!

I read this story a long time ago- back when I didn't have an account and I just wanted to let you know how good this was-despite a few of the plot holes and such. I read it again recently and I still really like it and you did a great job!

i assume he was the one who said "Now don't do anything stupid. You've got a lot ahead of you." I thought it was him, but i was unsure. would you mind maybe clearing that bit up for me?

i agree, it was a good chapter. however, i liked the last one as well.

woah. cliffhanger, anyone?

remember it.. hmm. well it was certainly interesting.

i know you're already finished with the story, but i figured you wouldn't mind if i answered these three old questions

1) long dark hair, full red lips, piercing eyes of some gem color. kind of like a young catherine zeta jones?

2) neither. she doesn't want pity but she hasn't done anything particularly admirable yet. she's strong, though. she will be admirable if she wants to be. i really like her character.

3) i don't know. i kind of like that she's nameless. it's interesting, you know?

that's awful! it's so empty, depressing. :\

i feel like i can identify with your mc.
leo. you have tall dark handsome and dangerous nailed.

so far i am enjoying the style and voice of your writing

I have to say, your grammar and some of the phrasing really made part sof the story confuisng, but your plot was so strong so I found myself being pushed through the whole story in one go. Very gripping and emotional, good effort.

wow a huge cliff hanger and on the last chapter
i dont know if i hate u or love u lol
this story was amazing!
:D tottaly satisfied

so nicely written
i cant wait to read the epilogue!!
i love leo especially cuz he's such an arrogent bastard

hey!
ok i know u completed this story i dont know how long ago
but i write and i love getting reviews so i understand u
i didnt even finish this chapter yet but i feel guilty for not reviewing to the others
also i wanted u to know that i'm guessing she is pregnant
well i will continue reading this chapter to find out
great job! i love it

hi! i like your story. you write a wonderful story.
This story made me curious and sad.
i'm curious about the name. ana.
i feel sorry for them. fate twisted them.
if only leo honest and speak to ana.
sometimes women need assurance.
but leo speak with attitude.
i know from the start. leo is madly in love with her.
and i believe in the end, leo is still alive and watching ana.
maybe the sequel?

this is the second time Ive read this story, and i love it more now. i like that you never mentioned her name throughout the story, it makes her almost ambiguous, as if she could be any one

I absolutely love this story. I'm not one for stories with little dialouge but this one really captivates me. Leo and Ana are extremely interesting characters and Ana's feeling towards Leo are incredibly intriguing. I am glad i stumble upon this.

I cried. It was the second third time I read this. I won't be over it for awhile. :')