|Reviews for Time in Your Head|
| me 7/26/05 . chapter 1
in one word: intriguing, unusual, interesting.
was it inspired by a stopry or just your head being creative. or as a you just said a person (am i correct?) im so smart i can read your mind. right this review is about your poem good very gooddo you guys have frosted flakes for breakfast because i like them a lot almost as much as i like... fruit loops and keegan. and that zebra bra that doesn't fit me.
| Slowly Sinking 7/17/05 . chapter 1
I love the optimism in this poem, and the way it comes full circle. Great imagery; fantastic writing. Keep it up.