Wonderful description, perfect words. Very profound.

Rebbillion i think is overated when you have a roof over your head, free food, and yet I still yelled at my dad to turn down the volume. i got yelled at. good poem, thanks for the review! WRITE ON!(=

Everyone needs to fail once in a while. Excellent job with this poem... another success, I'm sorry to say. :P

That was great!

Fantastic. The title drew me in and it was so well written -- all of it. Trying to come up with an adequate review. Falling short. The vocabulary and diction in this was stunning. Powerful and quite lovely. I adore the ending above all.

love the last line-- i've felt that way before.

WOW! Stunning work, beautiful with a flair of your own style and rich language. I love the theme best, it reflects my own thoughts, meanderings... Excellent.

Great write ;)