How so very true. It seems a bit stiff or something but its actually pretty good. Keep it up!

i like how you :spill your heart onto paper...smakes you silly...your not alone so stop saying it...shakes you..._

I love it! I think loads of people (Including myself in this) can relate to just pouring out their emotions onto a piece of paper when no one else is around or they dont want anyone to know.

I know the feeling. No one cares, no one listens, and paper is your only consilation. I know the feeling.

It was a great poem, and I look forward to seeing more like it.