 dizzymslizzy 2009-11-11 . chapter 7this is just to cute!! continue on plesae i cant wait to see wut happens next |
 ElvenPrincess99 2009-06-14 . chapter 7No, we need to kick your ass to make sure you keep going! I apologise sincerely for my bluntness, but if that's what it takes to have you continue, then so be it. If you're that way inclined, you'll soon have trouble sitting down for church too...As for my response to this chapter: Erk. And this should certainly be an 'M'. |
 ElvenPrincess99 2009-06-14 . chapter 6It was somewhat disorientating to switch around like that, but I'm glad you decided to give this site the whole thing. For some reason I just can't be doing with LJ. *shrugs* Don't know what's up with that. Devon knows. Secretly, she's a very sharp girl. |
 ElvenPrincess99 2009-06-14 . chapter 5He *has* made progress, even if he didn't want to! Now, the relationship shall take on a more serious tone with genuine feelings such as love developing between them. Well, it's to be hoped so anyway... |
 ElvenPrincess99 2009-06-14 . chapter 4Well...that was...ahem, very...good. My brain's sort of melted here. I do love Pierre, though. Pugs are gorgeous and he's cuteness. I feel sorry for Henry though. |
 ElvenPrincess99 2009-06-14 . chapter 3Hm, it's hard to pick a favourite part, so I won't. It's all wonderful- I can't remember if I reviewed the first two, but I don't think I did. So, this effusive praise covers all three. I found the way you called the twins, collectively, 'Jonandjosh' really funny. Effectively mimicking the way they're just a mashed up ball of crazy, I suppose. Personally, I'd go mad with so many siblings- Izz is a hero. Loved the fluff at the end. Excellent. |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 7so...George knows they are having sex? or he knows they are doing drugs? |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 6I enjoy Devon, she is a sneaky little girl, isn't she. |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 5haha, horny teenage boys learning self-restraint. |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 4wow, is the dog going to be the sexual villain in this story? |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 3haha, twins are smart and sugar high...I want cookies now. |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 2so does that mean the Devon knows cause Henry confirmed it? |
 uniqueindividual 2009-05-01 . chapter 1...I like the tabooness of this story. |
 Look Im Sparkling 2009-01-11 . chapter 7and then we need the next chapter :D where is it? D: im dying >.< great story :3 |
 Nazumi-Kun 2008-11-24 . chapter 7Can't wait for more^^ |