As depressing as it is, it highlights a very good point - that everything the parents do will be impressed upon their children. Monkey see, monkey do. The Offspring did a song about the same thing once.
But this one is better. Well done.

this is sad, i hope this isn't a story of ur life or anything.

Dark song-it's very good, and shows things differently-usually, people blame the kids for their behavior. Good song.

worst thing is that it's true. but very well written!

...wow... this is so... strong. powerful. truthful.

that is so good.. u defintley have a TON of talent! u'll go places someday

Wow. You are right. You speak the truth.

a fellow song writer i must give u a round of appaulse.

PS this sound like something KoRn would write

wow...

that song was pretty good. it had some meanfull things in it. ill would read some of your songs again