good stuff!...so i'll be wanting to see how the story ends..that means NO STOPPING half way!!..ok and i'll talk to you when i get back!

Holy crap! This is awesome, one of my fave's of yours so far. You had better freakin keep writting. And the beginning is really nice, very good opening, so yea, good work!

Nice job so far, I'm not one for vampire stories but this one is really good! Just remember to update!!