Well written and the message is awesome.

This is such an incredible image. It fits absolutely perfectly. Strong sense of desperation... which comes out even stronger when the speaker is seen as someone who knows that depths. Someone who has lost their grip before.

Powerful. Perfect.

Very nice. I like the style you wrote it in. It's a nice change from today's modern free verses and the poem itself was equally good. Nice work. =)

Firstly that was written beautifully. Second I love the imagery it gave me. That soft vulnrable desperation. It was sweet.

Nice piece of work. Captured the mood and the pain of the possibility of isolation very well

I like it.

Doode, that rawked. Yeah, God has kicked my depression more than a few times and I'd have this warm happy time feeling inside. Good times.Eat your fluoxetine heart out, prozac!! XD Nyahahaha!!

a wonderful poem that shows your devotion and your love for your Lord. it leaves me feeling warm oddly, the ending seems so optimistic amidst the angst. a lovely read though.~* noelle