hello! I set your challenge (i'm not sure if i'm allowed to tell you that but blah) and wow, you did brilliantly!! It's great that you made a drama out of something so common? i'm not sure that's the right word but yeah, great story, i loved the line "you're cute when you're thinking" (or something along those lines).. hehe, hope you enjoyed writing and great, excellent, amazing job!!

(and yeah sorry, if the phrases I submitted were horribly boring or whatever.. blah)

I like it. Good start and I'd like to see where it goes next. queenvixta

Well I liked it. ^_^ I was checking my email this morning and I got an Author Alert from your account so I decided to flounce off and read your story. Good job, girlie, it was really cute.

- Aeleice