aw...that was touching *sniff*

ps thanx 4 reading my work

Aw, lovely poem. I love the last two lines. Really nice idea, and great imagery.Keep writing!

That is a really good poem. I love the wording and I love the ending.

I like how it's really clear... A beautifully written piece

Oh that was soo sad The ending was very good=)

straightforward, succinct and just wonderful =) multiple usages of I kinda put forths the loneliness of the mother =)

This poem is very nice. I like the ending about how she can't call the little girl her daughter, it is a good touch.