Reviews for The Midnight Train

Reviews For: The Midnight Train

Twilight Starr 2007-11-30 ch 1,	Good poem. ~Twilight Starr~
partingissuchsweetsorrow 2006-08-18 ch 1,	That was awesome! I loved it. It was sad too. You are a good poet so keep up the work.
Magic Black Cat 2006-07-23 ch 1,	I like thise pome very much its sad.Infact you could say I felt them and seen them dances befor my eyes. Keep up the good work
Morbane 2006-05-08 ch 1,	This all makes a lot of sense, except for the title. Why is it about a midnight train? (I'm really sorry: I have to admit that in choosing to read this I was partly attracted to it because I like trains.) I like the rhythm of this. It has a sort of inevitability. Can I say that or does it sound too empty? Final point - very poignant, very true. It's a complex realisation, the implication of the anonymity of the 'other woman': that she's only an idea in your head and so although she's a somewhat justified target, it is impossible to direct emotion at her. But you put it so much better, of course.
Brian Eyre 2005-12-28 ch 1,	Outstanding imagery. You've told enough of the story that we can all understand the emotion, without going into so much detail that we can't all relate. You've accomplished what I think all poets should strive for.
my dangerous angel baby 2005-12-23 ch 1,	I don't really know what Staccato means but this was awesome. Great job! =)
Gaelwyn Vom'Raven 2005-11-06 ch 1,	This flows very nicely. It is full of pent up emotion - despair, pain, helplessness, and many others. It strikes home to a place inside each of us that we try to keep hidden, but know all too well. It makes my breath catch...
mizu no kokoro 2005-09-10 ch 1,	wow, eerie imagery~~ great emotions in this~~ keep writing!
i-wish-it-was-make-believe 2005-07-18 ch 1,	it had a good rythm to it. i enjoyed reading it, probably because i've once felt similar feelings toward someone!

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