I like the uncertainty. So is about a girl who sacrificed herself for a guy?

Lovely. Fabulous how you left it open to personal interpretation yet it still has meaning for you. Fantastic word choice. I'm thinking suicide/murder? The last line ties the image together perfectly. -jess

well, there are many interpretations. just have to figure one out that makes sense, now ;) great job! cio, hoellenwauwau

Great write ;)

Ah, well then. Interesting. I must try to figure it out.

oh, I love haiku.I can't make much of a comment, because this one is just simply excellent.

-counterpart