Woah. very vivid. good image... well, not enirely god as in good (as in versus evil... but i think that was your intention) but brilliant all the same.I really like it, kinda dark, kinda passionate. really really cool

Congradulations, this is brilliant. : )

I love this poem... It kind of reminds me about how I feel sometimes about my dad... great job

We are lacking in honest people, why can't they just be honest? I wish I could light a match for every liar around the world, but then... there probably won't be many people around but a few.

I love the comparisons you used to describe the scene "A devil trying to hug an angel; A peasant trying to hug a prince."

Keep up the wonderful work. _

Oh...Burn! heh sorry...this is really good. Awesome. Don't you dare stop writing!

i love the images you used for this. it's very good...

Not an easy thing to do, in some case. I'm glad you had the strength to... Great poem!